Monday, May 11, 2015

Becoming an Adult by Taylor Johnson

https://docs.google.com/a/roanokecityschools.org/document/d/1jaywOPOoK8xSVVJLL6n5T0CdLZxr0v8sYrRM4EGUrBI/edit?usp=sharing

2 comments:

  1. Where you start a new sentence and say "A child thinks that they will stay that way forever, but little do they know; is that each year is going by faster and faster." You probably could change it to "A child thinks that they will stay young forever. Little do they know, every year goes by faster and faster." Other than that, it is a great topic and very interesting!

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