Your essay was really good and I'm sorry you had to go through that. All you need to work on is punctuation. Some of your sentences were a little confusing to me. That's really all you need to work on. No contractions! Good job though.
The essay was good. You need to work on punctuation some more. That is the only thing that I seen that was bad. Other than the punctuation everything was good
The essay was good. You need to work on punctuation some more. That is the only thing that I seen that was bad. Other than the punctuation everything was good
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Your essay was really good and I'm sorry you had to go through that. All you need to work on is punctuation. Some of your sentences were a little confusing to me. That's really all you need to work on. No contractions! Good job though.
ReplyDeleteThe essay was good. You need to work on punctuation some more. That is the only thing that I seen that was bad. Other than the punctuation everything was good
ReplyDeleteThe essay was good. You need to work on punctuation some more. That is the only thing that I seen that was bad. Other than the punctuation everything was good
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