Michelle I really like your paper, it was beautifully written. I completely agree with your statement "but it's up to us to remain confident and happy with our selves." I love that considering my life motto is "Happiness is a choice." Is this something you are struggling with, life being hard? If you are, don't think you're the only one because like you said, it hits us in our teenage years the most. The only thing I notice that you can work on is a few grammar errors and word misuses. Other than that, your essay is a very true reality and you did a great job.
Michelle I really like your paper, it was beautifully written. I completely agree with your statement "but it's up to us to remain confident and happy with our selves." I love that considering my life motto is "Happiness is a choice." Is this something you are struggling with, life being hard? If you are, don't think you're the only one because like you said, it hits us in our teenage years the most. The only thing I notice that you can work on is a few grammar errors and word misuses. Other than that, your essay is a very true reality and you did a great job.
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